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8.6 Editing Focus: Commas with Nonessential and Essential Information

Writing Guide with Handbook8.6 Editing Focus: Commas with Nonessential and Essential Information

Learning Outcomes

By the end of this section, you will be able to:

  • Distinguish between essential and nonessential information in sentences.
  • Use commas for clearer, more effective sentences.

A comma is a mark of separation. It alerts readers to a brief pause or pauses within a sentence that is part of your analytical report.

Nonessential and Essential information

Nonessential information refers to information within a sentence that is not necessary for the reader to understand its meaning. Essential information refers to information within a sentence that is necessary for the reader to understand its meaning.

Nonessential Information

Placing commas around a word or group of words within a sentence usually indicates that the information is not necessary for readers to understand the sentence’s meaning. In the example below, the underlined words refer to and explain the phrase current math curriculum, but they can be removed without changing the meaning of the sentence: the math curriculum currently in use isn’t meeting current needs. The information is interesting and perhaps useful, but it is “extra” and does not change the basic meaning of the sentence.

The current math curriculumunderline, which was adopted by the school district 10 years ago,end underline no longer meets the needs of the students.

Essential Information

Certain words in a sentence are often necessary for readers to understand its meaning. In the example below, the word current was removed from between the words The and math and replaced by the underlined words that tell readers which curriculum no longer meets students’ needs. It is essential because without it, confusion may arise about which math curriculum no longer meets students’ needs.

The math curriculum underlinethat the district adopted 10 years agoend underline no longer meets the needs of the students.

To Comma or Not to Comma?

Place commas around nonessential information, but not around essential information. You can test whether information is nonessential by removing the information. If the meaning of the sentence is unchanged, the information is nonessential. If the meaning becomes too general or changes in any way, the information is essential. Often, nonessential information is introduced with the word which and essential information with that.

Place Commas around Nonessential Information

Place commas around information that is not essential to the meaning of a sentence, as illustrated in the following sentences:

  • The entire math departmentunderline, which consists of 16 teachers and 7 staff members,end underline has requested a review of the curriculum.
  • The department chairunderline, who has led the math department for 11 years,end underline has agreed to the teachers’ request.
  • The curriculum will become effective in Juneunderline, when the school year is finishedend underline.

Do Not Place Commas around Essential Information

Do not place commas around information that is essential to the meaning of a sentence, as illustrated in the following sentences:

  • According to the department chair, the math curriculum needs to focus on skills underlinethat students need after high school graduationend underline.
  • The math teachers underlinewho teach Algebra 1 and Algebra 2end underline have requested a review of the curriculum.
  • The teachers are concerned underlinethat students are not retaining what they have learnedend underline.
  • The department has consulted the curriculum expert underlineMalcolm Greenend underline.

See Punctuation for more on commas.

Practice Using Commas

Read each of the following sentences. Decide whether the underlined portion of each sentence is nonessential or essential. Place commas before, after, or around the nonessential information as appropriate.

  1. The department has consulted the curriculum expert Malcolm Green underlinewhose textbook is widely usedend underline.
  2. Two members of the math department underlineJanelle Brady and Tye Lavalleend underline are retiring next year.
  3. The textbooks underlinethat are now in useend underline are outdated.
  4. Students have given feedback on the online classes underlinethat have replaced in-person classesend underline.
  5. The math department now offers more evening classes underlinewhich attract more studentsend underline and fewer summer classes.
  6. Several instructors underlinewho teach mathend underline also teach computer science classes.
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